I been, I am, and will always be forever yours

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Open Poetry #13

I been, I am, and will always be forever yours

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-16 02:14 PM

This yearning inside,
no other can satisfy.
This hunger within,
only you feed.
This need in me,
only you fulfill.
My passion is yours,
no other will I hold.
This longing for love,
only you please.
Your kisses are treasures,
my heart keeps.
I've been,I am,and will always be forever yours.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-16-2001).]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-16 03:22 PM

I would only change "I been" to "I've been"....

but then, that's me....

enjoyed!

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-23 11:57 PM

Wow!! What a heart stopper! This was a sigher of poem.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-24 04:56 AM

Beauty in its best dress.

I love it.

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