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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2001-05-16 01:02 AM



My cloak is worn in vain tonight
No need that I should hide from light
Weary am I of this pain
Everlasting life of game.
Where search for blood I crave each night.
enjoying fear from which they fight
Yet feast I do and it must end.
This death I live I must contend.
Far too soon I'll turn on you.
Relinquish from this life you know
And take from you all beauty seen
Leave nothing but this bitter dream.
So burn I will this very day.
Give my life for love to stay.
And live inside your heart.


© Copyright 2001 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-05-16 03:03 AM


Hey you. Good to see your name in the scroll again!   And I like the hope in this one...have missed your style! And HIDING? naw....sometimes? just sleeping........zzzzzzzzzzzzz!  
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
2 posted 2001-05-16 07:06 AM


I like this style.I like the way it flowed.  I enjoyed the read.
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