Open Poetry #13 |
Their Dance............. |
SEA
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This music is made for dancing Slow tempo……….erotic beat That look in your eyes Only adds to the heat The melody is designed To invite touch of skin Yes here…………yes there……. Flesh smoldering sin With each step we take Around the dance floor My heart beats faster ...........a wanting of more Ummmm……… that's nice Hips push and sway This slow dance Has become……………foreplay Your lips find temple Mouth and chin As they slide down my neck ………..explosions within……… on shaky legs we finish the dance 'tis only the beginning of tonight's romance…………… ~SEA~ |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Sea, Cooool! Enjoyed the dance. Panne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Oh baby.... somebody better warn hubby to stop and get some burn cream on the way home this is waay cool...and waay hot!! me thinks ya been listening to those Prince records again *L* a little Erotic City maybe??? I just thought of something... I'll be back oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA
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Panne~ glad you enjoyed the dance....... Janet~ we keep some handy ummmmm Prince does tend to light a fire in me.....Erotic City is a good one...... then there's Dirty Mind....... and Feel U Up.... oh yes, Horny Toad....... Tangerine DO ME BABY.... and one of my most treasured favorites......Private Joy Damn U oh yea.....Head...... whew.......I better stop.......... he is the king of sexy........ ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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here ya go girlie this will keep ya simmering till hubby gets home ... dont burn the meatloaf LOL and yes... Do Me Baby is a classic |
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SEA
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thank you Janet...... it's his eyes....... and his voice......but mostly, his eyes....well, when he smiles, good grief....I still have another hour before Jon gets home!!!! Maybe I'll put the movie Purple Rain on and groove........ oh yea, no meatloaf tonight........tri tip steaks, chicken.....and potato salad........ LOL!! [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
um. . . SEA???? I believe that we might have a table in Adult for you if you keep writing like this. . . *reads it again to make sure that this is really SEA he's reading!!!* ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
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Sven~ Believe it baybeee..........(I'm too shy to go into Adult.......) SEA |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was great!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
yes-- seems to be a bit of a departure for you,, but well written as usual-- Jamie |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - lovely, senuous and lovely. Just right for dancing. BC |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
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Dancing can be soooo seductive. Nicely done, SEA. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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SEA
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Sans38~ thank you Jamie~ thank you, now I'm trying to figure out what my usual style is...... if you have a way to describe it, tell me! BC~ slow is the best kind of dancing thank you Claire~ yes, sometimes a dance can be SO intimate...... thank you ~SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, what a hot dance...I bet y'll left the dance floor scorching in flames huh ......wonderful poem! Nathan |
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Jamie Member Elite
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Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
SEA Style You give new meaning to reading the Sea few sailors would have the way or the means a style that is soft and romantic as well seldom in darkness does your ship sail she navigates deep waters and shallows unafraid the laughter she shares when the way is rough the course is stayed love is the mainsail romance at the helm hope is the wind and family her realm Sorry, but you asked..rofl Jamie |
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SEA
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Oh Jamie, you just melted my heart.........yes, I did ask, and I thank you, with all my mushy melted heart SEA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is nothing like music to bring out the best of a woman, who in turn, makes a man be all that he can be - you go girl! Fantastic job on this. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOOOOOOOO girlie...so HOT HOT HOT |
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Temptress
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read..loved..library material..comment for real later. |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Am I supposed to be able to walk and talk after that. I have got to go find my wife now- holy invoking batman |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
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Oh! I loved this one, I love to dance, been a long time, don't laugh but I wish they'd bring back disco.... Loved this one, SEA Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
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Mysteria~ thank you Paula~ tsssss! thank you Temptress~ thank you very much! James B~ LOL go get her!! Kathleen~ I wouldn't laugh at you......always with you, never at you.....besides, I love disco too...... ~SEA |
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kitkat Senior Member
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Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Very Nice SEA. Nothing like a dance to get things moving...He waltzed into my heart, as he danced me around the room |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You incurable romantic.... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I just had to reply to this one SEA. My oh my oh my...hey now. *S* What lovely visions you weave in this brain of mine. Mind if I insert myself into this poem? *S* |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Don't know how i missed this earlier,,, looking for my dance card i guess. This was lovely... Bernie a a day keeps the world 'g Bernie Slicker |
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SEA
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kitkat~ thank you Sunshine~ guilty! PK~ I think you and I on a dance floor, would be downright dangerous! Glad you liked this ~SEA |
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SEA
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Bernie, you snuck in there on me... thank you so much... SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
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Well SEA, there's always the dance floor in my mind. *S* |
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SEA
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well, if it's in your mind then by all means.......dance the night away...... SEA |
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Waseem Cheema Member
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Posts 369Pakistan |
Ummmm……… that's nice Hips push and sway This slow dance Has become……………foreplay is really very nice and sexy.....like.... I love to nice poetry. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
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Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Somewhere, I'm sure, our minds are dancing right now. *S* |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You are quite welcome -- (did ya notice there was a line missing?--heh).... "Dance the Night Away"--one of my fav songs!! Have you seen her? So fine and pretty Fooled me with her style and ease And I feel her from across the room Yes, it's love in the third degree Ooh, baby baby Won't-cha turn your head my way? Ooh, baby baby Ah come on! Take a chance You're old enough to Dance (Dance) the night away Whoa-oh (Ah) Come on g-girl, dance the night away A live wire, barely a beginner But just watch that lady go She's on fire, 'cause dancin' gets her higher than-uh Anything else she knows Ooh, baby baby Won't-cha turn your head my way? Ooh, baby baby Well don't skip romance 'cause You're old enough to Dance (Dance) the night away Oh-oh-oh (Ah) Come on g-girl, dance the night away Oh, oh-oh-oh oh yeah (Guitar Solo) Dance (oh) the night away. Hey, hey, yeah! Dance, dance, dance the night away Ah come on baby (Dance the night away) Hey, hey yeah! Dance, dance, dance the night away Uh, come on baby, baby (Dance the night away) Ooh, ooh, yeah Dance, dance, dance the night away. Ah, ha ow! ps--Van Halen...for those that might have been born just last week etc... Jamie |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I have this on excellent authority(mine): dance is a mandatory form of foreplay. If they can't dance, they can't dance. If you get my meaning. lol "I am not now that which I have been." |
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SEA
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yea, Jamie, love Van Halen!! there is one by Prince on his Rave un2the Joy Fantastic it's called "The Sun, Moon, and Stars".....it's great....... SEA |
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SEA
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JL~ oh yes, I believe it! Like kissing too....if he can't kiss........ |
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coyote Senior Member
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A sensual woman, and a good cook, too! I'm thankful I know one, also. My wife and I often hold each other, kissing as we dance to "oldies". It was the way we first interacted, so many years ago. Thanks for the confirmation. Great stuff, SEA. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." Wallace Stevens [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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SEA
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Coyote~ that is wonderful...some of my favorite memories involve dancing.....thank you SEA |
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