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Passions Gallery: VAS (a voice) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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voice of purest light a voice in the wilderness singing of His love voice of softest sound a voice in the open plain sing out to us now voice of golden heart a voice that is in us all show us how to sing ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Not only a lovely poem, but an Acrostic as well... excellent choice, superb words.... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sounds just like her. Very very good Sorry didn't even notice the acrostic till Lady in White mentioned it. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So softly written |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, sven, you bless us with your talent. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful.....  I love how you do these....with your style of grace, and tenderness.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You sly dog, nice write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady, thank you my friend. . . you noticed the acrostic right away. . . inot2B, thank you. . . it's ok that you didn't see it. . . it wasn't meant to be seen right away. . .  Paula, thank you for reading. . . INclan, thank you my friend. . . nice to see you again. . . Lauren, the pleasure is all mine my friend. . . Sy, me?? Sly dog? LOL Thank you for reading Sir. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
a triple acrostic--- very nice Sven There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful...all your poems say such lovely things...i loved this one...as always thanks sven if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is the way I've noticed her lately. Well done from your magical Sven Pen.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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