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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-05-14 09:26 AM

silence.
through a screen of words
there is silence
yelling loudly
into my being
filling me
with a longing
i thought i'd left behind
with my youth.
my youth...
when time was simply
complicated.
and now, i find that
simplicity
is no more.
complex is the heart--
and mine
too easily drifting
into its self-made snares
while leaning heavily
upon a glipse
of possibility...
silence.
there is silence
hovering above a box
i choose to fill
with the very heart of me.
holding little back.
saving nearly nothing
for myself,
should i fall
alone
into my tears
at the bottom
of silence...

-dgvarner
5-13-01

so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind...
-tim mcgraw

[This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 05-14-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-14 11:12 AM

no one should be silent unless it's out of respect or reverance.........right?

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2001-05-14 12:18 PM

A moment of silence was truly needed in reflection of this poem to take in everything . A very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it .
L.of.L. Tommy .
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2001-05-14 03:01 PM

KATHLEEN..i agree, no one should be kept silent..
that was not what this poem was about, but i'm glad you got something out of it..

!

TOMMY..lol..i like hearing from you..you give free kisses..and LOTS of them!

thanks for reading tommy..

hugs, g

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2001-05-15 01:50 PM

dg, wonderful poem, I like the way you wrote it...

I believe that sometimes when we don't want it the silience is so loud we can hear our heart.

Parker

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-05-15 07:45 PM

PARKER..yes, and the heart is ever loud at those moments..

hugs, g

(...so very sorry..i did not intentionally bump this up..my bad..)

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-15-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-15 08:44 PM

DG~
I'm glad ... you 'bad' !

I like this -

'there is silence
hovering above a box
i choose to fill
with the very heart of me.'

*Hugs*, gal in the 'sun' !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2001-05-16 02:06 PM

LOL...boy am i slow...it took me a while to figure out your

lines there MARGE..!!

...well then, i'm glad too..cause it put a "margie mark" on my poem..

thanks a bunch my friend!
hugs, g

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2001-05-17 04:15 PM

fallen rain...."...complex is the heart..."....and rather like the game of "pick-up-sticks"....a case of touching one, or some, without disturbing another or others. Thank you very much for suggesting this. Really. Bob

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