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Open Poetry #13

But I kept your spirit

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-13 02:19 PM

I woke up one day,
and I was lonely.
You were sleeping next to me,
but not your spirit,
it was out in the world.
And I felt empty.
I woke up one day,
and I was alone.
You had left ,
but I kept your spirit hidden in my heart away from the world.
There I will guard it forever.
And I felt happy.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-13 02:30 PM

No constructive critiques needed here. Can I get in line and be that spirit. Ahh. but my "trusted" best friend is the keeper of me. Thanks for the hearttug! **hugs**

For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-05-13 04:13 PM

Walker, in the last few posts of yours, you've reached a new level...I applaud...

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-05-13 05:59 PM

You do Walker, you do.

Titia

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