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Mike
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0 posted 2001-05-13 12:22 PM



I toss a rose upon the sea,
In rememberance of thee,
A single bloom, of ivory white,
In memory of, thy guiding light,
You gave me life, you made me whole,
With loving heart, you forged my soul,
Now you have flown, through heaven's gate,
And now I fear, that it's too late,
To tell you Mom, that I miss you,
To tell you Mom, that I love you,
And so I toss on ocean's wave,
A single rose, for you who gave,
Of mother's love, of all she was,
Why toss a rose?  I toss because....


A gentle wind blew cross the land,
Reaching out to take a hand,
For on the winds the angels came,
Calling out a mother's name,
Left behind, the children's tears,
Loving memories of the years,
Of joy and love, a life well spent,
And now to God, a mother's sent.
On angel's wings, a heavenly flight,
The journey home, towards the light,
To those who weep, a life is gone,
But in God's love, 'tis but the dawn.



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1 posted 2001-05-13 12:32 PM


Oh, Mike~
This is so lovely.

I toss the same rose on the St. John's River
where my mother loved to be~
I watch as it drifts along and think of the serenity and joy she found being on the water~

Thank you for sharing such a lovely memoried piece.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-05-13 01:44 PM


Absolutely beautiful....well done.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

latin passion
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3 posted 2001-05-13 01:51 PM


So much compassion in your poem. I'll put this in my libarary. lP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-05-13 07:33 PM


This is beautiful, Mike...wonderful write for your Mom...

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to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Saunni
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West Virginia
5 posted 2001-05-13 09:14 PM


Aww, this is sooooo beautiful! So beautiful!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-05-13 09:58 PM


A beautiful written tribute, Mike, thank you for sharing! *hugs*

~Tier

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