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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-05-13 10:39 AM


Deception Lies

Deception, perfidy, deceit, and duplicity
They’re the words that I hear constantly
Loving, tenderness, light, beauty and trust
They’re lying abandoned to quietly rust
And my heart lies there among the heap
I’m lost and forlorn no love can I keep
The tears are falling from my eyes again
And my soul lies ruptured and full of pain

Treacherous, dangerous diseased and wrong
They’re the actions of someone not strong
Delightful touches smiling eyes and heart
They’re all gone, they’ve been blown apart
And my soul lies wrecked and so confused
Not understanding why it’s been refused
The teardrops fall they’re my soul’s sad rain
Leaving me broken I’m dying alone in pain

Hopeless, lost, desolate and twisted torment
They’re the feelings that your soul has sent
Laughter, happiness, joy and surprised delight
They have deserted me flown into the night
And my spirit weeps for the joy it once had
Wandering aimlessly forever feeling so sad
The desolated feelings of being set adrift
I’m tossed so carelessly into hells deep rift


Marsha

I just want you all to know I'm okay, this was a poem that I wrote a little while ago, and it's emotion and feelings are in no way reflected in my present life. Thank you each one of you who have sent me your love and good wishes. Take care be of good cheer, I love you all. xxx




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 05-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-05-13 10:44 AM


"And my soul lies wrecked and so confused
Not understanding why it’s been refused"

Oh dear Marsha ... I felt every word of this incredibly emotive piece. You've captured such powerful emotions in these sentiments, and beautifully written. Many, many hugs to you for this heartfelt piece ...

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-13 01:40 PM


Sometimes you don't know what to believe and you have to step back and say "you know, who cares?!!!!!"

hope you are ok!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-05-13 01:47 PM


Ditto Irish Rose.. sometimes we just have to sit back and re-evaluate. Hope you're OK? Where's my teddy? ()hugs()( you way.

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2001-05-14 02:24 AM


Girl I have a baseball bat...lets do some batting practise on some of this stuff ok? Just toss it up and SLAM!!! I know its not happening now...but its aheck of a way to get rid of those memories...just line them up and smack them hard
Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-05-14 02:29 AM


Well I certainly am glad this is in the past and best forgotten.  You did write a heart rending poem, however.  Joyce
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