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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-12 02:25 PM


The cup overflow.
Tears of sorrow.
Tears of hope.
Sometimes it seems too much.
She told me, she loved her.
She told me, she missed her.
And that in a heartbeat,
she would take her back.
We held hands,
I knew her pain.
And told her that in a heartbeat,
I would do the same.
I told her, I loved him.
I told her, I missed him.
And that in a heartbeat,
my heart I would give for him to love me again.
We embraced,
we knew each other's pain.
Understanding love too well.



© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2001-05-12 03:38 PM


This is a great write! I think the title is so cool!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
2 posted 2001-05-12 03:49 PM


if only love were that simple
much hope for all that comes
AFTER
that moment of sorrow and regret

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-05-12 03:56 PM


With love there is to often sorrow, but Love is powerful....it can prevail.  Well written.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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