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Reading, again
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Reading, again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Reading, Again imparting my own translation he wrote in “Twenty-One” from Listen to the Warm that she was only a day away and he missed her already he had taken up the luxuries of her arms had talked to her over strong coffee having shared much more than you or I will ever know that which was between them ultimately he missed even her shadow then he ended the moment as a child, in want of life, itself… would I be that life to one so, now I go, to read again but take with me a wonder and you? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"he had taken up the luxuries of her arms" "ultimately he missed even her shadow" Splendid Karilea! I really enjoyed the delicate flow in this piece, softly moving with such a whispered question in conclusion ... just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me? ... (after reading this most lovely inspire) I am there with you..reading over your shoulder... allow me to turn the page... we will sit in the sun, sip raspberry tea ... and just be... Good morning Sun  Did you make it to the Milky Way, |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Your poem has so much compassion, and hit home. e-mail coming your way. lp For those who believed in me - |
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