axe murderer......(informal cinquain)

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Open Poetry #13

axe murderer......(informal cinquain)

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

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California, USA

0 posted 2001-05-12 02:25 AM

time
hacks away
at my face
saving my heart for
last

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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1 posted 2001-05-12 03:22 AM

this is really great....

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-12 06:47 AM

well I love the cinquain..I am not sure why I chose to read it as I usually don't like murderer in titles *s...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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Netherlands

3 posted 2001-05-12 07:26 AM

So much said in so few words, super.

Titia

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-05-12 07:45 AM

SEA...glad you liked it, thank you.*S*

Wynter...girl...you should always stop in and read my poems, no matter what the titles are. You can't tell a book by its cover...LOL...glad you like this one.*S*

Titia....thank you, glad you liked it...btw, I really like your name.*S*

Mike

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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5 posted 2001-05-12 05:16 PM

Interesting Mike...James

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

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Arkansas

6 posted 2001-05-12 06:18 PM

Ok the title got me in here. Thought we'd hear about some deep dark secret you keep in your closet. Glad I did stop by, enjoyed!

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

7 posted 2001-05-12 06:20 PM

YUes and this is so true. Joyce

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

8 posted 2001-05-13 02:00 AM

James...glad you found this interesting. Thanks for commenting.*S*

inot2B...Being a packrat, you never know what you'll find in my closet.*G* I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you.

Joyce...I felt it appropriate.*looking in mirror* Thanks for commenting.

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