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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-05-11 08:21 PM



You say
that for now
you must go
to travel a journey
to find your own path,
as now your heart
is saddened
yet somehow
full of wrath.
I watch you
walk away
knowing that I must
release,
a prayer
I say in my heart
that you will find
your peace.
My heart,
though it cries
inside
still beats steady
and true,
for you  to find
your happiness
is my only wish
for you.
My shoulder
still is here
to lean on
my eyes
will tell you
that I care,
and my heart
will still
be waiting
until your again
ready
to share.
Your searching
for a path
that leads you
to your destiny,
and when you
have come
full circle
I'll be here..
if that path
should lead you..
back to me.




On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-11-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-11 08:30 PM


Very nice and sweet sentiments.  Joyce
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-05-11 08:35 PM


Thank you Joyce, I appreciate your words.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

latin passion
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3 posted 2001-05-11 09:52 PM


You weaved a heartfelt poem filled with love...

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-05-12 10:19 AM


I only hope he knows......

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
5 posted 2001-05-12 03:41 PM


Finding ones own path is never easy.  I hope his path brings him back to your loving ways.  *s*
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-05-12 03:57 PM


Thank you for the kind sentiments.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-05-12 07:26 PM


GentleSpirit~


In the center of the circle
awaits the vision of ones who love us
Rounding out the reasons
we return to where we need to be~

When Gentle Spirits guide us
as they always do ...
We are bound to return
Blessed to be drawn back to the circle
richer because of those who wait~

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Just A Woman
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8 posted 2001-05-12 07:34 PM


I had to blink back tears.  This is beautiful, Gentle Spirit.  I know I've said before.....that your name suits you so well.  

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-05-12 07:42 PM


Marge, that is most beautiful, and I shall cherish it always......thank you from the bottom of my heart dear lady.  

JAW, softly smiling and wiping my own tears....and whispering thank you.....*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
10 posted 2001-05-14 10:35 AM


Now to put this in the library.  
Decaflame
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11 posted 2001-05-14 11:14 AM


As life is but a circle, only we shall know how wide it will become, the longer we walk..., the further we reach...

well done.

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-05-14 03:37 PM


SE, Deca, thank you both so much.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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