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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-05-11 04:59 PM



A Message in the Aches

Morning's
Awaken me,
Pain stilled only, by words
Yours, silently suspending me
In time

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-11-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-05-11 05:04 PM


This is a lovely presentation of what can hurt so very much....
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-11 05:07 PM


your senryu inspired me to cinquain...just to keep my poetic thought processes in gear, thank you D'flame

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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