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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-05-11 03:00 PM

Chantilly lace slips
billows, cascades around her
femininity

Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know. E. Hemingway

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-05-11 03:55 PM

Beautiful!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-05-11 03:55 PM

I like this very much. *S*

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-11 04:23 PM

Lovely...

~Tier

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2001-05-11 04:24 PM

yuh yuh yuh

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-05-11 04:41 PM

so soft..I think one of my favorite senryu's

thank you
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-11 07:31 PM

DecaFlame~

Quickly sneak a peek
Seeking blush of pink on cheek
Masculinity !

Just couldn't resist a little inspirational 'play'
with your ever-so-lovely Senryu.

Very well done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-05-12 04:09 AM

this is very pretty

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2001-05-12 08:14 AM

Decaflame, this is outstanding.
A round of applause and a jolly well done.
I love this 'Flame' it's truly beautiful
Love and warm stuff
Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-05-12 08:46 AM

I agree with Marsha, this one is outstanding....love it.

Charisma

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-05-12 10:09 AM

Beautiful ... so softly flowing and visual, very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

11 posted 2001-05-12 10:17 AM

I recognize the decade, so does that mean we may be about the same age?

Nice piece, and it's nice that femininity is somewhat back in vogue, don't you think.

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