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Open Poetry #13

Audacious Cousin

AJ Keating
Junior Member

since 2001-05-10

Posts 26
New Hampshire

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:48 PM

Thinking maybe it should be changed to Audacious sister? since the moon and us are born of the same soil, the Earth. *shrug*

Sonnet XXX

Audacious cousin, Goddess of the Night,
I approach thee now to request guidance.
I find myself yet again at split sight,
And must decide where to make my entrance.
On the one hand I am confronted by
United elements: Fire and Water,
Which envoke within a propensity
To remain beside this earthly daughter.
Bright Orb, the sole alternative put forth
Is to remain safely in solitude.
But what future does this hold; what's its worth?
None but for a hermits life be construed.
This is the fork so long as left has right,
But all will find solutions in your light.

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"...apathy isn't it...we can do something. Ok, so flower power didn't work, so what? We start again."

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 01:12 PM

A totally unique line: "I find myself yet again at split sight,"

well done!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-05-11 01:20 PM

I love this, AJ,

*smiles*

~Tier

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