I let go(some may remember this but it's been revised)

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Open Poetry #13

I let go(some may remember this but it's been revised)

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-03-28 10:02 AM

Her sarcasm fell
slapping against me like
a cold lump of lard
Then I remembered that her thumbs
were too short, like toes
and her hair was not
naturally red
she just set out bear traps
nothing left to say
just see ya later
I don't need this

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-28 10:05 AM

Definately sounds like a see ya later.........

this is really good

SEA

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-03-28 10:09 AM

Amazing how beauty fades when the love sours. Nice write.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-03-28 10:25 AM

Yipes yuh ! brings thoughts to the fore

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-03-28 09:03 PM

Ah the reality hits... It surely does... Well done, James...

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