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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
looking beyond the clutter in my head, I enable the shimmer to emerge... rising above the confines of cliche, the cerulean composition takes cue and roars into force... playing curiously in the depths of my perception, the soundtrack of this evening’s premise rolls on... spinning blindly in whirls of repetition, crystal currents cross the doorstep of my introspection... leading my gaze to the distance, azure then yields to crimson for the sake of esteem... soaking up every last bit of my interest, wild gold radiance reveals the dignity in nature’s solution... -kh 05/10/01 *this was inspired by one of my photos, and, unfortunately, I don't have a scanner with which to share it...so, please forgive the absence of a graphic in this one...  to be with you... |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
After reading this I'd LOVE to see the pic. LITL, †Heather† Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I enable the shimmer to emerge... rising above the confines of cliche, crystal currents cross the doorstep of my introspection... ================================ leading my gaze to the distance, azure then yields to crimson for the sake of esteem... soaking up every last bit of my interest, wild gold radiance reveals the dignity in nature’s solution... ========================== we need no graphics when ya write like this me girlie ... you have some very cool images and lines in this sp... and the introspect is done with depth. and as for this line: "rising above the confines of cliche," ya got that right...NO cliches from your pen excellent writing poetess flake  NOW....ya say you need some pics?????  take your pic and teach says its time to rhyme  http://us.greet1.yimg.com/greetings.yahoo.com/g/img/sn/park05.jpg http://us.greet1.yimg.com/greetings.yahoo.com/g/img/sn/park18.jpg http://us.greet1.yimg.com/greetings.yahoo.com/g/img/sn/park19.jpg http://us.greet1.yimg.com/greetings.yahoo.com/g/img/arch/psc020.jpg hey....Im only the messenger LOL ACTUALLY ... he told me to go find a pic of a african tree frog..and give that as the rhyme assign... my reply to that was..BLAH BLAH ( I dont need the extra credit) LOL and Ive got the puter power  rofl"Nature's first green is gold, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"crystal currents cross the doorstep of my introspection..." You might not be able to post the picture, but you paint with your words! *S* Well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Have I told you how much I enjoy your poetry? I look for it, please don't stop writing...... Kathleen Blake |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Heather: thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!!  JM: boy, am I glad YOU'RE the one on the computer...sheesh...an African tree frog?? whoa...but, anyway...thanks as always, m'friend, for your enthusiastic reply...it's an honor to know you enjoy my writing...  ...I'll get to work on that rhyme ( ) assignment...MAN...suthern: thank you so much, my friend...I truly appreciate your kind reply! thanks for stopping by!!  Kathleen: yes, you have let me know, but I won't ever get tired of hearing it! but, thank you, my friend, for your wonderful compliments...and, it is an honor to know that you, too, enjoy my writing...and, don't worry, I don't plan on stopping writing anytime soon! sp  to be with you... |
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