Open Poetry #13 |
Breathe |
Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Breathe Holding my breath, I barely move Sensing that to do so might Cause you to feel unsure As you explore the possibility Of pursuing our sexuality, to where We do more than only touch Feeling this too much I breathe…….. Touching you, touching me, Where I want you to be And………………. I breathe. Tasting you, tasting me Where I want you to be And……………. I breathe. Wanting you, wanting me, As I need you to be And…………. I breathe. The fragrance of our lusts As we progress further into Our seeking sensuality And…………. I breathe. Holding my breath, I barely move Sensing that to do so might Cause you to feel unsure As you explore the possibility Of pursuing our sexuality, to where We do more than only touch Feeling this too much I breathe…….. Touching you, touching me, Where I want you to be And………………. I breathe. Tasting you, tasting me Where I want you to be And……………. I breathe. Wanting you, wanting me, As I need you to be And…………. I breathe. The fragrance of our lusts As we progress further into Our seeking sensuality And…………. I breathe. Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
I wrote this twice to give one the breathless quality of holding your breath and then slowly soooooo slowly letting it out..... so as not to frighten ;-) Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very sensual!!!!!!!!! Very Romantic!!!!! LITL, † Heather † Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Thanks Heather you honor me with your time and concern enough to comment Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Breathless..... Can I breathe now??? Ahhhhh... What a picture!!! Passion you've got. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Ahhh LP you have got the gist of it for sure, I bow to your acumen Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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