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Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
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Fresno CA.

0 posted 2001-05-10 07:22 PM



Breathe


Holding my breath, I barely move
Sensing that to do so might
Cause you to feel unsure
As you explore the possibility
Of pursuing our sexuality, to where
We do more than only touch
Feeling this too much
I breathe……..
Touching you, touching me,
Where I want you to be
And……………….
I breathe.
Tasting you, tasting me
Where I want you to be
And…………….
I breathe.
Wanting you, wanting me,
As I need you to be
And………….
I breathe.
The fragrance of our lusts
As we progress further into
Our seeking sensuality
And………….
I breathe.
Holding my breath, I barely move
Sensing that to do so might
Cause you to feel unsure
As you explore the possibility
Of pursuing our sexuality, to where
We do more than only touch
Feeling this too much
I breathe……..
Touching you, touching me,
Where I want you to be
And……………….
I breathe.
Tasting you, tasting me
Where I want you to be
And…………….
I breathe.
Wanting you, wanting me,
As I need you to be
And………….
I breathe.
The fragrance of our lusts
As we progress further into
Our seeking sensuality
And………….
I breathe.

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


© Copyright 2001 Suz Madaus - All Rights Reserved
Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
1 posted 2001-05-10 07:24 PM


I wrote this twice to give one the breathless quality of holding your breath and then slowly soooooo slowly letting it out..... so as not to frighten ;-)

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
2 posted 2001-05-10 07:27 PM


Very sensual!!!!!!!!! Very Romantic!!!!!

LITL,
† Heather †

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
3 posted 2001-05-10 11:55 PM


Thanks Heather you honor me with your time and concern enough to comment

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

4 posted 2001-05-12 04:19 PM


Breathless..... Can I breathe now??? Ahhhhh...   What a picture!!! Passion you've got. LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Sweeetsuz
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
5 posted 2001-05-12 05:04 PM


Ahhh LP you have got the gist of it for sure, I bow to your acumen

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


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