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Open Poetry #13

Seeds Dream

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-10 07:17 PM

Seeds Dream

I’d like to play
in your garden green
it’s the place where
seeds dream
then I wonder
do they dream in color
or will their size
be smaller or taller
do they yearn
just for sun
do they fear
after beauty…done
is the dew
tears they weep
do they cry
while we sleep
yet they hold
their heads in grace
while we gaze upon them
with prefect embrace

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-05-10 07:26 PM

Oh dear, I have been told to talk to my plants so they will grow. Now I'm going to have to take them to a shrink to analyze their dreams.
This is a unique poem.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

2 posted 2001-05-10 07:27 PM

Simply wondeful.

"What I was living, the same am I now, dead." --Capaneus, THE INFERNO

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-05-10 07:44 PM

nice lines:

"is the dew
tears they weep
do they cry
while we sleep"

you have a thing for dew I think . . .
I like it too

Krawdad
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