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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Fresh Water Lover |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I’m the salt-water fish In your fresh water eyes You compose me a wish That our love’s a disguise Drops from the ocean Run from your stream One single motion And you wash me clean Trailing whipping fish Beached upon the shore You’re my pretty trout I’m the sea you adore You're the fresh and the clean I’m the torrential spray You’re the naiveté I’m about to give way You thought that you'd change me I'm you yet unclean I stare into your eyes And you see what I mean I can drink from your depths And filled from your eyes But I can’t nourish you So I'll make you despise Treated and poured In the heat from above Wash away the salty taste Of our incomplete love You won't drown in the sea Let the earth be your death For when you long for me You'll gasp for every breath [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-10-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Got me 'hook line and sinker'.... good one. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this read like a song! Kathleen Blake |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
So beautiful. The love is felt. LITL, †Heather† Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
awe man? you werent playin with this joker! geyah, this sukas bad!! theres no doubt about this one. its cool that yer confident of being this "salt-water fish." awe man, there's so much depth here it makes me think. imgonna read this all night! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Like oil and water huh? Some things just dont mix...and no matter how you try they never will...great write you |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, Walt. Like, wow! Corinne |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Deadly Walter. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is fantastic Walty! enjoyed it very very much  Maree |
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