Reply to Sunshine's "Sun" haiku

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Open Poetry #13

Reply to Sunshine's "Sun" haiku

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-10 02:39 PM

Just one golden beam?
Nay. The rays come, abounding.
Seeming teeming beams.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-10 02:43 PM

very very pretty

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-05-10 03:12 PM

Ok, I give up. You always do these so much better than I do....

I think I'll put my pen down now.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-10 03:16 PM

I feel a rainbow coming on!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-05-10 03:20 PM

LOL with Irish....I promise NOT to cry!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-10 05:11 PM

SEA ~ Thank you sweet (not salty) one

Sunshine ~ Whom do you think you are kidding?

Colleen ~ Thanks for the read.

Sunshine ~ Thanx for that. I wuz hopin' my work was not that bad

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-05-12 07:54 AM

love it....great one interloper.

Charisma

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