Open Poetry #13 |
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Trio (500th post) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa ![]() |
Here is three short poems for my 500th post. I'd like to thank everyone at Passions for letting me park the Moorglade in your field for a while. The New Wave Ebony sky, a silent velvet black, a dark breathless night, your shadow moved across the moon a sigh on the face of the earth, platinum hair, coiled stars for an instant your eyes transfixed moonbeams lips thick as blood, rubied with smiles, The sand was warm and soft as gossimer the sea ran from us chasing the breeze into thundering caverns, You took my hand and we walked into its restless sleep, eagerly awaiting... The new wave. Never When eyes meet eyes, when worlds collide when hearts beat together when you are me when lock fits key when theres no such word as never when moon meets sun when we are one when all we needs each other then we shall be forever free to care for one another. Snowstorm ( perpetual poem ) If I could but savour once again that snowy day in December when the snow lay like a silent shroud beneath the grey and heavy cloud which did but open to release the swirling snowflakes in my face which stung my flesh and dulled my mind and made me stumble as if blind back to the little wooden shack where the meories flood back As if I could but savour once again that snowy day in December when... Olias. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lots of imagery in this one, Olias. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
HEY---congratulations Senior! ![]() I thought I was going to pick a favorite and I've been hopping back and forth between them...at first I thought "new wave" hands down and then I read snowstorm but "never" is also quite a gem...so? I think I'll take all three please! Beauties, all three! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I can only say... WOW! ~Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hey you!! Congrats on your milestone... and I thank you for many kind and generous replies to my work that make up some of that number, and these gems are classic Olias... excellent imagery and flow. The first one is stunning!! well done poet sir...we thank you for sharing ![]() "Nature's first green is gold, |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Irish Rose, Your gentle heart and verse teach me to see nature in all its beauty. Serenity, Your verve and lust for life put pep in my step and a pulse in all I do. Tiersdin, I wish I could be as prolific and intuative as you J.M. Thank you poet friend for your support and inspiration to become all that i can be Regards and thanks to all who have allowed me into your hearts and your monitors it is much apreciated. Olias. |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Congrats OLIAS, I love reading your work. It always puts a smile on my face. Shelby Olivia |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Shelby seeing your face always puts a smile on my work, Big kiss. |
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