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vandana
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0 posted 2001-05-10 11:08 AM



Gentle ,
Slowly,
Gently to my mind,
See you standing
front of me,
And slowly you take my hand,
Gentle,
So gentle,
The softness touch of your fingertips,
On my face,
Sitting here,
you  and me,
Where ,
long ago,
We met on this evry day,
In such a place,
So,
Slowlt,
Everything,
All the good times rolls by,
Into my mind,
Slowly,
Gently
Into my mind,
you remaining me
of the way
we used to sit together,
And turn the pages of yesterday,
The pages were written with pen
we wrote It long ago,
Slowly ,
Each page of memories
turns away,
So gently ,
Then come Into my mind,
Gently,
So gently,
So gently ,
never knowing of the good times
we had It before

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-10 11:10 AM


This is a very quiet, soft piece....
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-05-11 09:31 AM


A nice, gentle poem!

Nathan

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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3 posted 2001-05-11 09:35 AM


Reads like a soft caress..

enjoyed!

~Tier

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