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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2001-05-09 10:47 PM


I adore you...I cherish you
You're the next breath I take
On the wings of your love I can fly.

Let me love you...caress you
Be all that you seek
I'll be yours 'til the day that I die.

You're my sun...you're my rain
You're all that sustains me
Through the seasons and days of my life.

You're the music...the storm
All that sets my soul soaring
Above this lonely worlds strife.

You're the dream...you're the magic
Of love everlasting
I've never known moments like this.

I was lost... 'til you found me
A sad empty child
And you brought me home with a kiss.


© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Tiersdin
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1 posted 2001-05-09 10:53 PM


This is beautiful, Paula, stirs the heart...

~Tier

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-05-10 05:37 AM


This is finely written... stirring indeed!!!

Regards,
Sudhir

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-10 06:26 AM


Paula indeed it can all begin with a kiss...James
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2001-05-10 07:35 AM


This is a wonderful expression Paula.

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


kitkat
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5 posted 2001-05-10 07:57 AM


Warms my heart knowing you are no longer lost.
Welcome home.

vandana
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6 posted 2001-05-10 10:45 AM


nice
forevernbluejeans
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7 posted 2001-05-15 12:07 PM


Such a softly rendered write...the love shines thru
RMW
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8 posted 2001-05-15 12:12 PM


Paula....very touching...and appreciative. Bob
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-05-15 12:50 PM


Must be real love I guess...

Titia

Alan
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right next door
10 posted 2001-05-16 10:55 PM


Maybe he makes you feel this way because you are the magic in his dreams. A great read of a great way of feeling
Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2001-05-17 12:29 PM


Tiersdin...thank you so much

Sudhir...it is so good to have you back among us sir...thank you

James...I knew the kiss would get ya baby...thanks

EagleOne...expressions of a heart in love...thank you

kitkat...no Ive come home...thank you

vandana...thanks

forevenbluejeans...I certainly hope so...thanks

Bob...thank you...I miss our emails...write me LOL

Titia...must be...thanks

Alan...I'd like to think I am...thank you

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