Open Poetry #13 |
Nobody's Perfect |
Heartstarter Junior Member
since 2001-03-14
Posts 39 |
Some Poets call verbosity an out-dated curiosity, on their guards constantly for verbage run amuck. Some Poets use temerity when penning their sincerity, much said with such severity, no need to nip and tuck. Some Poets are irrepressible while coining the inexpressible, they leave content inaccessible and reader wonderstruck. Some Poets will insinuate, in order to continuate, thought thats meant to stimulate, until the pen gets stuck. Some Poets use embellishment, that condement of relishment, drowning what it was they meant in gallons of the muck. Some Poets are oratorial, some aim for the pictorial, still some are so tutorial, the work seems to instruct. Some Poets show classic dependency, some boast rhyme resplendency, but all of us hold the tendency for poetic misconduct. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Heartstarter.... this is wonderfully penned!!! Great job, and I have to admit I saw myself in there more than once!! Ha!! And I like the ending, not to mention the title.......It's a keeper in my book! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Anybody that can use the words you did here, with such rhythm and flow...is certainly entitled to a bit of recreational poetic misconduct. Loved it! |
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Heartstarter Junior Member
since 2001-03-14
Posts 39 |
Thanks,guys!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, excellent poem...I agree with everything you said....I'm putting this one in my library....by the way, I loved your rhyme cadence....may I borrow it? Nathan |
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