Open Poetry #13 |
The Missing |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
The Missing Theres a hill above this smokey town I can climb to be with you there in the distant heat haze a glint of oceans blue, and in that soft day dreaming its comforting to know that oceans wide horizon must also wash your shore, The sun thats high above me those gentle warming rays will be watching over you on steamy summer days, The stars that fill the heavens that twinkle just for you, are with me every evening I'm wishing on then too, The breeze that blows each morning that lifts you when your down touches me, in passing as it travels on its round, And though time moves so slowly it never stops, you see and so my love be sure that time, will bring you home to me. Olias. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I couldn't have said it better or more beautifully... truly enjoyed reading this, Olias *smiles* ~Tier |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Every second that goes by is another minute closer to being home. Thank you for showing your strength and love. Shelby Olivia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Olias, this is absolutely beautiful, and leaves me with a sense of having seen it through your eyes. No wonder you are the poet you are.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a glint of oceans blue, and in that soft day dreaming its comforting to know that oceans wide horizon must also wash your shore, The sun thats high above me those gentle warming rays will be watching over you on steamy summer days, The stars that fill the heavens that twinkle just for you, are with me every evening I'm wishing on then too, The breeze that blows each morning that lifts you when your down touches me, in passing ====================== Olias...the blending of imagery and emotion in this is superbly conveyed...' this is lovely, a sincere and romantic write very well poet sir. "Nature's first green is gold, |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Tiersdin, I knew you would understand, thanks for replying. Shelby Olivia, Only five months my love, with your strength its a breeze, I love you. Sunshine, Your very kind, and I'm blushing poet friend. J.M. Hi, thank you praise from you is praise indeed, I wear a happy smile (never could get used to these emoticons). Regards to you all Olias. |
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