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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-05-09 11:07 AM


in bed
on back
eyes wide
all black
i tire
i sleep
i dream
i weep
a smile
i see
a voice
faintly
calls out
my name
she's here
again
we talk
so much
we laugh
we touch
two hearts
entwine
within
my mind
a dream
like this
should have
a kiss
and when
lips meet
so soft
so sweet
back comes
my dread
it's in
my head
all black
eyes wide
on back
in bed



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1 posted 2001-05-09 11:11 AM


Mike this is great!!! I liked this very much....I like how you did this too    SEA
Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
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2 posted 2001-05-09 11:13 AM


touches one quickly for lasting effect...

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


Packratmike
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3 posted 2001-05-09 11:49 AM


SEA...thank you.  Glad you liked it.*S*

Sweeetsuz...thank you. That's what I hoped to do.*S*

Mike

samantha4
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since 2001-05-09
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2001-05-10 09:10 PM


Mike....i absolutely LOVED the form of this poem!  great job....very enjoyable

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

Packratmike
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California, USA
5 posted 2001-05-11 01:37 AM


Thanks sam....2 syllable lines make for a quick read (and write).  Glad you enjoyed it.

Mike

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