| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
||||||
| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
|
||||||
| Open Poetry #13 |
|
fade to reality |
|
|
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
|
in bed on back eyes wide all black i tire i sleep i dream i weep a smile i see a voice faintly calls out my name she's here again we talk so much we laugh we touch two hearts entwine within my mind a dream like this should have a kiss and when lips meet so soft so sweet back comes my dread it's in my head all black eyes wide on back in bed |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike this is great!!! I liked this very much....I like how you did this too  SEA |
||
|
Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
touches one quickly for lasting effect... Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
||
|
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
SEA...thank you. Glad you liked it.*S* Sweeetsuz...thank you. That's what I hoped to do.*S* Mike |
||
|
samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Mike....i absolutely LOVED the form of this poem! great job....very enjoyable i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings |
||
|
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thanks sam....2 syllable lines make for a quick read (and write). Glad you enjoyed it. Mike |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
