Open Poetry #13 |
The Shell |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
'Based on a true story when I was 'bout 15 years old' *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love hearing about the sea.....thank you for this. Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
touching my heart here.......really this is wonderful SEA |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Shells are amazing gifts. Perhaps it is the environment in which we find them...as your poem suggests. They tell us about the hope for calm....what some have described as the possibility to "be still enough to have companionship with God." Thank you for sharing. Bob |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, Most of my childhood was spent near the seashore and I remember well the storms and hurricanes that would wreak havoc on the coast. I guess that's one of the things I like about the ocean. Nothing is ever quite the same. Each day there's a new beach without footprints. Each hurricane season nature tends to take back a little of what belongs to her. This poem brought it all back. Such good writing here, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And this said to me...that even in the worst situations, if we look hard enough we can find something good? Too deep? Well I loved the poem even if I created the metaphor by accident. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ 'I have never seen an island look so lonely' What a wonderful thought ! Enjoyed this stroll along your beaches of recall. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . reminding us that there's always something to take with us. . . the lesson. . . wonderful Lauren. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes......poets are always fascinated by the sea, the power, and the unknown quality that lies within it's ageless being. You spin a magic thread and capture that quality within your words, then share it with those of us who never seem to get enough of the sea. Thank you for this one...I love it!!!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Irish Rose, Thank you my friend....it was my pleasure SEA~ Good to see you back again..... thank you for allowing this poem to touch your heart... RMW~ They indeed do tell us of the calms....thank you for visiting... Michael~ "Each day there's a new beach without footprints. Each hurricane season nature tends to take back a little of what belongs to her" *** I must say I love how you stated that, such inspiration there...thank you for taking a look back with me... Mysteria~ Yes, just like the shells we can all survive any thing, I strongly believe that....thanks, and hugs to you... Marge~ It did look so lonely, even the rocks....but it has been renewed and just a lovely as it was before...thanks for strolling with me... Sven~ every time I return, or leave the Oceans side I take something with me....thankyou my friend....I appreciate you... ~ Sunnyone~ I appreciate you so much....thank you for responding as you have...I can never get enough of the sea...one day I will live there, and it wont matter which Ocean I live on....HUGS to you.... Hugs to Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A shell of hope, brought through the turmoil, very lovely read. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Gemini~ Thank you for stopping by to read... Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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