Open Poetry #13 |
Let Go My Heart |
kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Let go my heart So gentle your touch Of illicit love Entrenched in a fantasy True love from above? Hearts so consumed In desire’s fire Love clothed beautifully In lust's black attire To find that key That you so behold Entrapped, my heart Is this lust you’ve sold? Forsaking my feelings Abandoning the scene Loveless tears glitter Real love not seen Illusions of love Lust in disguise Struggling to let go My heart tries |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
An awful ache emits from these words . . . ouch . . . great expression, Kat. All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it is hard. . . but if you must, you must. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Letting go is so hard to do. Very good expression of this impossible situation. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Yes it is so very hard, but sometimes is the only way to go. Though it is sad, it's a very good write. Sauni Sauni :) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Can I offer a bug-hug! |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
I FEEL YOUR PAIN OF LOVE UNTOLD OF TIMES REFRAIN CAN BE SO COLD LOVE IS NOT LUST THIS COULD NOT BE LOVE IS IN TRUST ONLY THE HEART CAN SEE TIME IS CRUEL IN IT'S PLANNING OF LIVES ONE CLEAR FUTURE IS ALL THAT CAN SURVIVE WE HOPE FOR A MIRACLE FOR OUR HEARTS ON FIRE WAITING FOR THE MIRACLE TO FULLFILL THE DESIRE THE MIRACLE FLEES FROM OUR HEARTS GRASP LIKE THE LEAVES FROM THE TREES LIKE HOLDING THE PAST WE MUST LIVE OUR LIVES THROUGH ALL THIS TORMENT FOR ETERNITY COMES SOON FOR LIFE IS BUT A MOMENT |
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