Open Poetry #13 |
A Deeper Bond |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
If I ever need an answer I look into your eyes To see into forever Like looking at the sky Bow my head in humble praise And kneel before you Offer up anything I have And give my love to you Time seems to magnify As we go through so much Only deepens the bond Of hearts when we touch They say that stars revolve Around the moon in the night Just as I am with you And burn from your fiery light No tricks that time can employ Will ever our love destroy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lucky, lucky lady you have there....this is so beautiful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
beyond time. . . excellent PK. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
PoeticKnight, this is so very beautiful and I'll bet a lot of lovers wish it was written for them. ME |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Romantic, just the way I like it! |
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WhiteOnyx New Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 9New Zealand |
Great poem! Hits the 'nail-on-the-head' with a great definition of the word 'Love'. "The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most lovely poem indeed! |
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