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Open Poetry #13

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-07 02:37 PM

Go on,
doubt my intentions lover,
or is it your own
that you fear most?
the same hastily built walls
which separate & divide us
to hide the ravishes of love
are the very ones that keep us
lonely & alone
Tonight,
when masks fall off
& there is no reason to pretend,
will you recall the miracle
of us?

~Tier{R.T.}
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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-05-07 02:42 PM

Wow.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-05-07 02:56 PM

Beautiful!!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-07 02:59 PM

*smiles* Thank you, Interloper and Brad, I appreciate your comments.

~Tier

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-05-07 03:17 PM

Written with such insight. Our masks always reveal all our wonder and all our flaws. Fear is a fine response to many things, but not at the expense of love.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-05-07 03:30 PM

I happen to agree, Julian, well said! *smiles*

~Tier

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-07 03:48 PM

climb over those walls!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-05-07 04:04 PM

*chuckles*

good idea, Rose!

~Tier

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2001-05-07 05:51 PM

great write and message added to library.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2001-05-07 06:40 PM

Thank you, Bernie! *smiles*

~Tier

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