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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-05-07 01:42 PM


Awake me, I must be dreaming,
I know within, this can not be,
Awake me, from this trance,
If not I will not awaken,
I will give in,
To you,
To feel your kiss,
feel your hands,
feel your touch so softly,
Aware of each and every stroke,
Awake me, before I indulge,
In this dream so close to reality,
awake me before I feel your heart.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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1 posted 2001-05-07 02:08 PM


Seems like you're are having so much fun dreaming it would be a shame to awaken you  

Write on.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-05-07 03:16 PM


this is great...I really felt this   Great writing    SEA
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-07 03:43 PM


Don't wake up, enjoy it!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sven
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4 posted 2001-05-07 06:49 PM


oh. . . but only if it weren't a dream. . .

wonderful rose. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-05-07 07:02 PM


Seems like every time I have one of those wonderful dreams the phone rings or I fall out of bed or something...James
Rosebud1229
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6 posted 2001-05-07 10:22 PM


thanks Interloper, ah to dream, and dream ,

Sea, dreams do have a way of reaching out,
I guess that's what's so scary sometimes.

Irish Rose, sometime I will have to wake up, but it's nice to dream especially one like this!

Sometimes dreams are more than dreams, they stem from your everyday life, this is where we must be careful, for me anyway.

James I know what you mean, I've had those annoying phone calls, usually someone trying to sale me something, I try to go back to sleep, begin again, no such luck.

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