Open Poetry #13 |
Awake me |
Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Awake me, I must be dreaming, I know within, this can not be, Awake me, from this trance, If not I will not awaken, I will give in, To you, To feel your kiss, feel your hands, feel your touch so softly, Aware of each and every stroke, Awake me, before I indulge, In this dream so close to reality, awake me before I feel your heart. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Seems like you're are having so much fun dreaming it would be a shame to awaken you Write on. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is great...I really felt this Great writing SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Don't wake up, enjoy it!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh. . . but only if it weren't a dream. . . wonderful rose. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seems like every time I have one of those wonderful dreams the phone rings or I fall out of bed or something...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Interloper, ah to dream, and dream , Sea, dreams do have a way of reaching out, I guess that's what's so scary sometimes. Irish Rose, sometime I will have to wake up, but it's nice to dream especially one like this! Sometimes dreams are more than dreams, they stem from your everyday life, this is where we must be careful, for me anyway. James I know what you mean, I've had those annoying phone calls, usually someone trying to sale me something, I try to go back to sleep, begin again, no such luck. |
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