The Wool Goes on the Loom (by doreen's daughter 8 years old)

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AliciaRose
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0 posted 2001-05-06 05:32 PM

The Wool Goes on the Loom

I looked thoroughly for the special design.
The wool goes on the loom.
Weave it because I said so!
Dying cloths is so unique.
There is a big thunderstorm.
I looked thoroughly for the special design.

Alicia Rose, (age 8), 5/6/2001
From my homework project.

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

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1 posted 2001-05-06 05:40 PM

~~what a wonderful keepsake~~~LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

VAS
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2 posted 2001-05-06 05:42 PM

Alicia, I like it ALOT! It's like pieces of your day have been shared with us and your mood has changed while you thoroughly looked for the design.

Well done!!

FiGHT_aGaiNST_FoRM
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aMeRiCa

3 posted 2001-05-06 07:21 PM

Your talent shines through quite clearly. And I found this more insightful than some on here that have more experience. Always look to your heart for the answers.

Always write with your eyes closed and your heart opened wide.

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-06 07:28 PM

my daughter wrote poetry when she was 8 y rs. old., this is lovely!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 2001-05-06 07:35 PM

Looks like there is another poet in the family. This is absolutely lovely !

Poet deVine

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6 posted 2001-05-06 07:55 PM

It's nice to see you here again! This is wonderful. I hope you get an A on your assignment.

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-05-06 08:02 PM

Hi Alicia!

I don't have to look too hard to see the special design in YOU! You are a remarkable poet and I look forward to reading your work in the future OFTEN. Very deep thoughts here, missy!

Nan

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8 posted 2001-05-06 08:07 PM

Alicia - Hi Sweetie...

This is a wonderful tapestry of words you've woven...
You GO, GIRL...

Auguste

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9 posted 2001-05-06 08:47 PM

Alicia,

This shows a lot of talent and I really like it a lot. Looks like your mom has some competition in the writing department. :-)

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Martie

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10 posted 2001-05-06 08:54 PM

Alicia...I really enjoyed your poem...you weave unique words.

doreen peri
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11 posted 2001-05-06 10:03 PM

Alicia... let's not tell them which ones were the spelling words, ok? hehe

great sentences make for a great poem... any time you write sentences, you can put them in lines and it's poetry!!!

it's all poetry!!! and i am very proud of you, kiddo !

Marge Tindal

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12 posted 2001-05-06 10:56 PM

I taut I taw a POET !
It's Alicia ! !

I'm proud of you too !
I think you aced this one !
A+
Congratulations, hon !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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