Open Poetry #13 |
Relationship |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Relationship A relationship of time and eras. Depending, Relying, Grant’d Talking Loss, Communication, Closeness, Talking Time, Arguments, Mending, Talking Sharing, Working, Loving Talking Caressing, Touching, Hug’s Talking All this, Still trying To make The rocking chairs Rock together, After all the Years. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Glad to see ya posting again, Bern. Loved this, especially the ending. You write and grow my friend! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
aw, come on you aren't in a rocking chair yet are you Kathleen Blake |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
would be great if things worked like this...nice sentiments you have written here Bernie |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Many adverbs here, really good, appropriate ones...love though, is a verb. Action not a description. Wish someone had thought to remind me of that. Hope your effort is sincere and fruitful...we all deserve love. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
there was another choice? \\ |
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