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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-05 11:41 PM

Chardonnay

A glass or two or maybe more
Never have I done before.
"Empower you"...she says to me
I need to do, I need to see.
Will stop the words of thinking  HE
Addiction not,  is he to me.

It's soothing feel, I drank it all
I sit here now, am feeling raw.
Tomorrow, I, shall begin my start,
Removing hurt and pain from heart.
Because the moment has reached it's time,
These thoughts that burn into my rhyme.

Empower me, promote myself
Remove the dust, of me on shelf.
Get up, the sunrise starts my new
I am, I will, make my debut.
Forget the past, pursue my goal
Fulfill my needs, be in control.

One more drink I need this night
To put away my fears, my plight.
Tomorrow, I'll empowered be,
And stop the  words of thinking HE.
Because the moment has reached it's time
As I complete these words of rhyme.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-05-06 12:18 PM

Thoughtful and determined...I hope the morning finds you there.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-05-06 11:27 AM

All I can say is I understand so well, this feeling, knowing that you MUST release the love, yet, needing to wait just till morning, to do so. Beautifully done, as always
Sandra

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-05-07 05:26 AM

Is it true what they say, "Tomorrow never comes"?

"One more drink I need this night
To put away my fears, my plight.
Tomorrow, I'll empowered be,
And stop the words of thinking HE."

Good luck on starting new!!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-07 09:54 AM

Nothing like a nice glass of wine which I can't enjoy anymore cause of my meds, but boy I love this one!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-05-07 09:59 AM

you describe your feelings so well, excellent write my friend

((warm hugs))
Charisma

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-05-07 10:35 AM

Well done.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-05-07 10:49 AM

I like!

~Tier

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-07 07:00 PM

I happen to have a wonderful bottle right here. . . care to join me??

excellent Maureen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-05-07 07:06 PM

And with the release comes new beginnings...James

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2001-05-07 10:35 PM

I really need a drink(funny I don't drink). Lovely poem.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

11 posted 2001-05-10 06:20 AM

I always enjoy reading your work, excellent!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

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