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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-05-05 06:21 PM

Solo Sensual

When I go to bed at night
sometimes I think of you for awhile.
These thoughts of you tuck me in
and bring a sensual smile.
You know how much
I love to kiss you
and just as much
I hate to miss you.
I am aware that my touch
feels it needs you so much.
Surely you have noticed
how my eyes admire your thighs
and how my hands possess ten fingers
full of longing to caress
your breast in tenderness.
It is now obvious
how close to perfection
you have been blessed.

Jameslee@May05,2001

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-05 09:00 PM

oh yes. . . I like this one James. . . really. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-05-05 09:03 PM

Surely you have noticed
how my eyes admire your thighs
and how my hands possess ten fingers
full of longing to caress
your breast in tenderness.
It is now obvious
how close to perfection
you have been blessed.
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love the inner rhyme here SBJ ...
and the visuals wrapped in sensual admire.
very nice poet sir

you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-05-05 09:03 PM

Very Solo Sensual, beautifullly romantic.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2001-05-06 10:06 PM

very romantic, soft with just the right touch of tenderness...

Lauren~

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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-05-06 11:08 PM

AAAHHH babe...we are all perfect in loves eyes...hugs to you

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-05-06 11:08 PM

'I love to kiss you
and just as much
I hate to miss you.'

I can so relate to this, James...wonderfully romantic poem!!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

7 posted 2001-05-07 01:34 AM

nice thoughts to sleep on...

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2001-05-07 03:25 AM

Such tenderness and romantic... nice work, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-05-07 12:15 PM

Yep, another lovely, love poem James.....keep them coming!!

Nathan

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-05-07 01:23 PM

GR8. write on.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

11 posted 2001-05-07 01:32 PM

this is so romantic, loved the rhyme, and your right very sensual.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-05-07 04:25 PM

James~ I really liked this one! Good thing I got the swamp cooler going......

SEA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2005-07-19 11:02 PM

Thank you all for the lovely responses...James

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