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Somewhere In A Whisper
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Somewhere In A Whisper |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*Marge Tindal*~  Whisper me gently ... from lilting tongue Curls unfurled ... in whispers now sung Wrap remember ... in satin smooth ink Quill upon paper ... parchment drink I will hear you ... softly spoken Words you pen ... in simple token Breathe of love ... so I can hear Thoughts from you ... reach waiting ear Whisper me gently ... so you will be Folded in keepsake memory Somewhere in a whisper ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very nice use of pauses and italics, it created a unique feel only present in written poetry (as opposed to spoken poetry). Wonderful work, Marge!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love it! I can't believe I was able to stay away from here so long! I truely love your writing! Great piece!
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge.....you take my breath away.....another beautiful poem...you weave such enchantment into all your words...helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Simply gorgeous, the poem and the trappings. Joyce |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This is so beautifully romantic - I wish I could claim it - If it were written to me = I could easily fall in love - someone - somewhere - is VERY lucky. Regardless - it will go in my treasure box |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AllanR~ Thank you. After reading your reply - I put it to the test in a recording ~ It also falls gently in whispers spoken.  VoiceLess~ So glad you are back. Thank you for finding this one to your liking. OneSlickLady~ I feel that I am blessed with such loving muses who share so easily. Thanks for letting us know we 'enchant' you. Joyce~ *smiliing* here ~ Thank you so much. Wilfred~ You may 'claim it'~ For I think it was written for everyone who enjoys the renderings of another ... and you certainly do that ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhh Marge what a treat to read, beautiful art you present here. excellent as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BEAUTIFUL MARGE OH MY WHAT TREASURES YOUR MIND AND PEN PRODUCE.......... BLESSINGS ON A SORE HEAD..........LOVYA WARRIOR |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you know I LOVE this one..right??? your presentation is as lovely as the poems intend... ya cant go wrong with (...)  love ya lady  me you speak to me in riddles |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Marge- This touch poem touches my soul, I needed to read something like this tonight. Thanks for this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ I thank you kindly, sweet friend. SoaringEagle~ Sweet ~Warrior~ of my heart ... Thank you for kissing my ouchie ! Love you right back ! JanetMarie~ *nodding quietly* Love you too ! Walker~ I am pleased that you found it solace for the night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"Pen of the poet"...surrounded in your magic and love.... Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, as artistes go, you are the best...your combination of phrases...pauses ...and picture create vivid images indeed! write on Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Breathe of love ... so I can hear Thoughts from you ... reach waiting ear" Such a beautiful and softly flowing render Marge ... you've captured the flavour of your sentiments in the mood of this delicate piece, very lovely indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Whispered words of Love. Just plain sweet. Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you, sweet poet. Kethry~ That is such a nice thing to say. I appreciate your thoughts. Kit~ Thank you for 'delicate'. I had hoped that this piece was just exactly that. Melton~ Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...this is exquisite! |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
simply wonderful |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
You took my breathe away with this tender poem and now I can but whisper. Superb. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Breathtaking....amazing... MARGE..that piece was incredible... I LOVED IT.. you are awesome as always!! -Jeff |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thank you for finding it so. *Hugs* JLocke~ Thank you, poet. Julian~ Awwww ! Thank you for adding a whisper-soft reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBaker~ You were caught in the pause of my reply ~ Thank you SO much for letting me know you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Marge, no problem.. your the best!! [This message has been edited by JBaker515 (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
I want to read more from you... cant wait for more!! *Jeff Baker* |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Marge, ~~you know I love your poems. You always pull at my heartstring. You've painted a token as a masterful artist! LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you for your enthusiastic replies.  LatinPassion~ I appreciate knowing you enjoyed this one also. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So tenderly beautiful... *S* |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Charming graphic, wonderful words and the sound of harps.... perfect Marge. I enjoyed very much, thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Knew you'd enjoy this one. Thank you. OLIAS~ Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well yes, of course you've got me smiling again . Wonderful words, as soft and delicate as a whisper on the wind, take care!"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge....I hadn't read this until now....so I guess that wave length that we share? It's still working.... I guess we both "listen" quite well...you know, with that part of our being called our heart? Yes, that's the way we do it.... well done, my dear.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have touched me with your ink, as you always do Just beautiful, Marge Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is so precious....and a beautiful addition to my library! SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ I love it when you catch my whispers. Thank you so much. Karilea~ Yes ... it's still working ... still playing our heartstrings~ Thank you, sweet lady. Lizzie~ I appreciate knowing that, sweet friend. SEA~ I love being in your library ... Lots of good company there, I'm sure. Thank you, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Marge! Very beautiful! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
So very touching that it left me breathless and in awe. The music surrounded each and every line you wrote. LP(sigh) For those who believed in me - |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Breathtaking Marge~ wonderful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I am really pleased you got a chance to read and enjoy this one. LatinPassion~ So very pleased to know you enjoyed it. GentleSpirit~ Thank you very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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