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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-04 05:32 PM



Drops of heaven fall on my head,
some I absorb others I don't.
One day I feel your love,
the next day I don't.
To keep you is not easy.
The world pleases so easily.
Distractions are on my hands.
In other paths I just glide,
but your path is difficult and hard to find.
Your love gives me much.
My love is just too selfish,
it fears to open up.
But you, you offer true love.
The kind that last forever.



© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-05-04 05:51 PM


It's nice to have someone who cares for you...James
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2001-05-08 11:56 PM


yes it nice to have some one who cares for you, and it's nice to notice that too

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-09 12:06 PM


To keep you is not easy.
The world pleases so easily.
Distractions are on my hands.

walker---I do believe you're on a roll...loved these lines, relate to every word!

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