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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Swan Song  Heartstrings compose love mellifluous melody swan passion kindled ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Wow! One of these days, I am going to try this form. I love it! Kathleen Blake |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ you do these masterfully.....love this  SEA |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Love this. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
*giggles"...swans necking?  i loved this . You do these so masterfully my friend!Passion,imagination |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The swans were a gift, and then the beautiful format of short form. Excellence! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Very nice haiku and wonderful graphic! This reminds me of all those summers at the lake when I was younger. The swans would always come by looking for food. They were so accustomed to people they'd eat out of your hand. Had to be careful though, those teeth are sharp!! LW All writing comes |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Thank you everyone! |
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