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Open Poetry #13

Impact

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-04 02:24 PM

Impact

If I
believe
what do I
achieve

if secrets
revealed
am I
healed

disclosed in
fact
waiting on
impact

shall I find
resolve
mystery now
solved

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-05-04 02:39 PM

if only "resolve" is that easily found

nice writing
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-05-04 05:01 PM

disclosed in
fact
waiting on
impact

This hit me with great...well...impact.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-04 05:11 PM

You hit your mark so well.

"I am not now that which I have been."

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-05-05 02:09 AM

If belief is put into action
if no new secrets are added
if consequences exist only in the past
life awaits
and no one needs to know it
but you

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2001-05-06 04:25 PM

Yes...you will find it

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

6 posted 2001-05-06 05:06 PM

There is much depth to this one.

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

7 posted 2001-05-06 05:32 PM

great poem. A very nice flow and with words you can think about and interpret.

*JOE*

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