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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 beneath the bridge, the creek still flows; above the water, the clouds remain afloat... the magenta of your heart’s flowers through the snow continues to leave me spellbound... in the bare branches, the sparrow still sings; protected by the light of day, hues of blue linger overhead... the constant downpour of your affection, in spite of the cold always moves my soul to tears... eternally enveloped in the dark sapphire, the half-lit moon sighs; forever destined to illuminate my obscurity, the glistening reveals all... the iridescent allure of your eyes against the night never ceases to seduce the inclination in me... -kh 05/03/01 *dedicated to the "illumination" in my life...  to be with you... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooooo lovely! Very beautifully done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ That's so purrrrrrty !  Nice shine to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the constant downpour of your affection, in spite of the cold always moves my soul to tears... eternally enveloped in the dark sapphire, the half-lit moon sighs; forever destined to illuminate my obscurity, the glistening reveals all... the iridescent allure of your eyes against the night never ceases to seduce the inclination in me... ============================= my goodness this is gorgeous and only you could write of winter when we are just thawing out...and make us want to feel the cold again... the imagery in this is superb SP.... as is the intend of the emotions... very cool(no pun)  VERY COOL write!!!  Now its official that I can call ya frostybritches ROFL  well done poetess of snow you speak to me in riddles |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Star gazers of the night. For your light burns not low. The sparrow sings not off key, and the waters will calm down. For your signature passion does not go unnoticed. LP He is my pen, I am but the paper he |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Denise: thank you!! glad you liked this!  Marge:  thanks! I am happy you enjoyed!  JM: hey, m'friend...thank you so much for your compliments...well, I wouldn't say I'd want the snow back, just keep the nice 60-65 degree weather we're havin' now...then I'd be satisfied...  ...but I am glad you liked this!  lp: well, what can I say to such a response except thank you so much...I am glad you could stop by for a read! sp to be with you... |
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