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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-27 06:15 PM




                                                    Bleeding Soul.

                                               The rage of the anger ceased
                                              The war of words are appeased
                                               My hand bleeds from thorns
                                                 Piercing my palm's veins
                                             Stretching the red rose out to you

                                             Tumbling along the corridor of love
                                             Falling down the pits of terror's cove
                                               Sitting near the rocky shore
                                             Reflecting if it is worth it once more
                                              A deep gaze at the wavy horizon
                                             Sends a misty awakening in motion
                                            My soul has bled far too many times

                                             The search for happiness rhymes
                                                Through my fingers' joints
                                             As the depths of my words' points
                                             To a meaningful desire for freedom
                                             From the oblivion of near martyrdom

                                              It is here within my soul's anger
                                                At the very tip of my finger
                                              That the bleeding ceases to flow
                                            It is here within my poetry that I sow
                                          The seeds of happiness, and compassion
                                            For my soul needs a real companion
                                              The "Poem", my lifelong support
                                          Always there, in the midst of my discomfort

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-28 05:29 AM


This is absolutely breathtaking, Daniel.....in every way

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-11-13 07:57 PM


So sad yet, I'm glad there lies comfort somewhere!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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