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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
I stand in the heavens of my dreams but yet it seems that my life is empty who is it that im searching for? is it just a companion or just a partner for eternity planty of sugestions I have been told but none come closer to the truth reality is just a dream and a dreams seems like reality but which one is the truth the dreams that I experience or the images I see in my sleep both seeck for my total atention and also my souls devotion is a nightmare a warning that my death is close? or just a tale of my creative mind? no matter how much I try the nightmare aint never stop and the ending will never come who is he trying to kill? I see the bodyes but not their souls I feared for my families safety wich they get closer to the killer would this be sign or just a dream would this be reality or just my souls screams just hope I get to heaven wished that from age 11 didnt fear life or much less death i just fear the nightmare i lived in since my parents got thoughts of leaving the scars are writen stories that all this i say is truth and if u want more prooph come join me in all my dreams LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I've always felt my dreams or just an over load of my mind. Things I've seen or read mixed up into a movie in my head. Nothing to fear just something to distract me from peaceful sleep. Enjoyed your poem. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Juan...I agree with inot2B. Thanks for sharing. Bob |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
thanx for ur opinion.................but drems always have some meaning in life ...... |
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