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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-03 10:14 AM

Of Words

Sometimes I see his words of night,
pressing me in feelings strong.

Sometimes his morning thoughts arise me,
even when the dark seems long.

His loving words, attach to me.
They dress my day, in silken touch.

A poet's pen seeps into heart.
I can't escape, I read him much.

Creating moments, one by one
to capture me, in treasures find,

I am absorbed, in tunes of pen
and dance his shadows in my mind.

I've never felt the "all" of him,
but touched I have been, with his "awe".

Each abc, that comes to me
removes a stone from this, my wall.

This he, whom I may write about
or sometimes respond to lovingly,

Is you, or you, or maybe you.
Addicted I, to some degree.

A poet's world surrounds my needs,
sometimes weaves my body's hold,

Keeps together thoughts of mine
from fleeing me in words of bold.

If loving you, is not enough,
if wanting moments spent with you...

If those three words, in want to hear
cannot pass from lips in true...

Then all is lost, in world of love,
an open heart in silence fills.

In sadness, days become the nights,
dark and empty, the words to quill.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-03-2001).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-03 10:55 AM

it should be enough, if not they are wasted onthe wrong ears!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2001-05-03 11:44 AM

I agree with Irish Rose - double ~S~

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-03 11:45 AM

A poet always hopes that his or her words will be accepted with understanding. Joyce

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-03 11:58 AM

Enjoyed the read, very much. I do think you want "body's" instead of "bodies" near the end there. I certainly agree with the other responses and I liked the rhythm and flow of this.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-05-03 11:59 AM

Awesome. Great little lines and very forceful emotions.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-05-03 01:20 PM

nakdthoughts - you know words are a most powerful thing, but words whispered softly into your ear, they you can believe.

BC

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-05-03 11:20 PM

Wynter~
There's a new moon on the rise ~
Caught a little glow, did ya'?

'I've never felt the "all" of him,
but touched I have been, with his "awe".'

Beautiful, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

8 posted 2001-05-04 03:04 AM

Right now 2 song comes to mind. "I never walk alone." Wonderful poem, she walks with beside him. The other "unchained melody," So, to BC, hear my 3 unspoken words, now feel them...I love you. I wish I could attach a copy of songs to play as I'm writing this. It says it all. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-05-04 09:20 AM

Wow! Back with a fervor!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-05-04 02:33 PM

Kathleen
who really ever knows what is enough anymore..I thought 30 years of devotion was a lifetimes worth of enough and it wasn't... thank you huggzzzz
M

Bill, then a double thanks to you..*s

Joyce
I agree...

Virginia, thank you for the correction, I usually catch those things..

PoeticKnight
hmmmmm Awesome...I sometimes like that "generational" word..

I am full of emotion..beware of the nakd one *s

Bill
or words sung into one's heart through air waves..."most powerful thing" I must agree.
~sighing~

Marge
hadn't noticed the new moon at night but during the daylight it sure catches my attention..so do you think that is what it is?      thank you  huggzzz

~Wynter/M

latin passion Right now 2 song comes to mind.  "I never walk alone." Wonderful poem, she walks with beside him.  The other "unchained melody," So, to BC, hear my 3 unspoken words, now feel them...I love you. I wish I could attach a copy of songs to play as I'm writing this. It says it all. LP
Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Interloper Wow!  Back with a fervor!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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