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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-05-02 08:10 PM


                     “MY ANGEL ONCE AGAIN”
                                    by
                                Bill Charles
                                  ~~~~
You were once my angel, and I pray to see you in heaven,
        I know why we’re apart,
                just couldn’t stop it…
All those arguments, and harsh words to each other,
        every one is remembered,
                to this I do admit…

But I’m not writing to criticize, just to be kind and gentle,
        we both have suffered enough,
                and we’re really not, that much different…
I talked about hurt feelings, perhaps you didn’t understand,
        so after awhile it came to be,
                my heart, became absent…

But that’s enough of sadness, happier times will come,
        when we’re way up high,
                and we see each other there…
We once acted as if we were one, in ways, we still do,
        it seems now though,
                we can only want to care…

Perhaps someday in the future, when all the hurt has passed,
        we’ll find each other once more,
                and talk with the fisherman…
But even if it’s not the same, I will still hold your hand,
        and perhaps you’ll still become,
                “My Angel Once Again”…
                                 ~~~~



[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 05-02-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-05-02 08:19 PM


Bill, you always seem to find the best words. . .

excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-05-02 08:23 PM


Bill~

This is so tender, such a fine romantic poet you are.... I find my self caught up in your words each time I read...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-05-02 09:00 PM


I feel those happier times coming too, Bill..huggzzzzzz

*for your words always touch something deep inside me
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Cerenity
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4 posted 2001-05-02 09:19 PM


Hi Bill,

Beautiful writing here very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Bill Charles
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5 posted 2001-05-02 09:29 PM


Sven - hello my friend, how are you tonight? I'm in the best of moods and looking forward to tomorrow, as I'm taking a break early from work and going fishing for a change.

Thanks once again for stopping by my humble place, and for those always gracious words.


Greeneyes - words such as yours compells me to continue to write. I thank you for this.

nakdthoughts - oh, I certainly hope that they are. I can feel a smiggen of them;.

latin passion
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6 posted 2001-05-02 10:08 PM


My Dearest Soul Mate, caster of my heart
for you have reeled me in days past. It is I, that words fail her, not her love. You know her, the who's, what and why's. I'm am here - caring, and loving you all the more. Fret not, I just need to let the words flow and not check and recheck.  My love mutilplys each and every day. I long to hear your voice - So until I do, I seek your pen.
To you...I love all that you do, my hand seeks yours and more.  As you have said it "I love you," now feel it "I LOVE YOU"
LP

He is my pen, I am but the paper he
writes on.
~~3LW~~SM

Ariana
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7 posted 2001-05-03 04:00 PM


Bill

"But even if it’s not the same, I will still hold your hand,
                           and perhaps you’ll still become,
                                   “My Angel Once Again”…

Very beautiful words - I only hope that you find happiness some day.

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