Open Poetry #13 |
Looking for My Way Out |
ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Looking for my way out from underneath your controlling ways I know somewhere out there for me lies better days You and your control-my heart can take no more Please tell me why you do this to me? When I have done nothing to you You put words in my mouth that I've never even thought of You ask me stupid questions time and time again You get me so frustrated that I cannot stand to be around you You wonder why I spend more time with my friends, at work and school-than I do with you Look in the mirror, you will see your answer I have had enough and am now..... Looking for my way out. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Good one Laura! The longer you allow the control to go on, the harder it is to break away from. Now, if i can just start following my own advice. Ha! Take care---RJ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. Thanks! I'm trying.....there is a long road ahead of me. You give great advice. :-) *Laura* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...seems your desire to be done with this will take you out...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Laura, RJ, allow me to give both of you the same advice. . . great poem Laura. . . take those first steps. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
kaile here i applaud you..admitting that something is wrong is never easy but you have done so...now that you have identified the crucial step, i wish you well in conquering your problem...it won't be easy i guess...but do remember that you have people like me rooting for you... take care |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
James Michael, Thank you for reading. :-) John, Thank you my friend, from the bottom of my heart, for your kind words and freindship. Kaile, Where have you been??? LOL Thank you for rooting for me....it means alot. e-mail me sometime. *Laura* |
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