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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-01 03:47 PM

Exhaustion tooks its course.
After a long day of work,
what could be worse?
No strength to exercise.
No strength to eat.
Just to lie here, in this warm bath.
Surrounded by bubbles instead of troubles.
I close my eyes,
one image, plagues me,
you and I now apart.
I cannot say anymore.
Exhaustion just took its course.

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-05-01 03:50 PM

This spoke so well of the exhaustion brought about by today's daily stresses. The bubble bath was the perfect response.

"I am not now that which I have been."

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2001-05-01 03:56 PM

take a breath you have done good

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-01 04:06 PM

I relate to this well, from last night. Just close your eyes - let the warm waters take it's tolls away, drawing you into an open space. See the image, hold it close, for the distance space drawers closer into slumberland. I too was exhausted. LP

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-05-01 04:54 PM

Nothing like a leisurely bath to revive you. nice poem. joyce

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-05-01 11:48 PM

I so relate to the exhaustion...physically and emotionally! Fine write!

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

6 posted 2001-05-02 12:53 PM

Excellent write. True emotions dripping and bubbling from this literary tub.

Only one thing bothering me:
"Exhaustion TOOKS its course."
sorry, it just stood out and said "why am i here?"

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

7 posted 2001-05-02 12:58 PM

again, time creeps on me - Walker,I may follow that course. LP

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

8 posted 2001-05-02 09:20 AM

Calgon...take me away! *S*

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2001-05-02 09:38 AM

I can definitely relate to this poem! enjoyed reading!

~Tier

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