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Open Poetry #13

Life Is A Real Strugle

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-05-01 10:46 AM

as all them trees grow in the city
strugling to breed fresh
and all they get is smoke
I grew up in a world where the cash was low
bitten to tha blow
and the hustle was the only way to go
petty crime was the flow
all that mony made my eyes glow
we'll this blunt burns slow
as all them rivers flow
in a cold winter
I'm frozen in the ice
iced chained as price
with my soul in game
wiced up my mind with no shame
I go back in the picture
but still in the picture's frame
im seen as a lame by others

thug once an angel this days
and I've strugled back in my ways
unfrozen off the ice to reality
hapiness in life is a posibility
but pice in my soul is eminent

thugs wont cry caus it hurts their pride
a tear can get u back in true life's ride

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-05-01 01:57 PM

Juan..."as all them rivers flow in a cold winter.." I really like that. It has a solid sound to it. Bob

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-01 07:25 PM

this is good. . . says a lot. . . there aren't too many people that know how it really is sometimes. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

3 posted 2001-05-01 07:42 PM

thanks for ur replies ...it really mean a lot to me ..........thanx

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