Open Poetry #13 |
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Edge Senryu |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
On the cusp of change May came in on Thunder's rain April went with wind |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart what can I say you always write these so utterly perfectly. This is so true and utterly fabulous You know I love it of course Love and warm stuff Puck ![]() ![]() And oh how much I miss it here, in my haven, my sanctuary, where life is filled with wonderful warmth and such beauty I can weep with joy. take care and keep here a candle burning so I can find my way home ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And away April goes! Lovely words Karilea, a great visual! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Like this one very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm very happy May is here! So much going on in the garden and my Hummingbirds are back!! ![]() |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent write, Sunshine, I loved this! ~Tier |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you are so soo sooo cool with these |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, April is gone, on with the month of May! Kathleen Blake |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Rain? Where? All we have is the beginnings of another year of drought and dried-up lakes. Oh well... I enjoyed this, Karilea, as I do all of your work, my friend. ![]() Michael Proust- |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the way you presented april and may...is this called personification? i honestly say that this is one of your best haiku which i had the chance to come across so far, IMHO ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And not a fond goodbye in British Columbia - we can hardly wait for a "regular" rainfall! Lovely presentation my friend. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it very much..... Charisma |
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