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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-05-01 05:56 AM

On the cusp of change
May came in on Thunder's rain
April went with wind

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2001-05-01 06:17 AM

Kari dear heart what can I say you always write these so utterly perfectly. This is so true and utterly fabulous

You know I love it of course

Love and warm stuff
Puck

And oh how much I miss it here, in my haven, my sanctuary, where life is filled with wonderful warmth and such beauty I can weep with joy.
take care and keep here a candle burning so I can find my way home

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-05-01 06:48 AM

And away April goes! Lovely words Karilea, a great visual!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-01 07:51 AM

Karilea~
Like this one very much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-01 09:42 AM

I'm very happy May is here! So much going on in the garden and my Hummingbirds are back!!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-05-01 09:50 AM

Excellent write, Sunshine, I loved this!

~Tier

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2001-05-01 10:55 AM

you are so soo sooo cool with these

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-01 12:51 PM

Yes, April is gone, on with the month of May!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-05-01 02:24 PM

Rain? Where? All we have is the beginnings of another year of drought and dried-up lakes. Oh well... I enjoyed this, Karilea, as I do all of your work, my friend.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-05-02 12:25 PM

i liked the way you presented april and may...is this called personification?

i honestly say that this is one of your best haiku which i had the chance to come across so far, IMHO

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-05-02 02:32 PM

And not a fond goodbye in British Columbia - we can hardly wait for a "regular" rainfall! Lovely presentation my friend.

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-05-02 04:09 PM

love it very much.....

Charisma

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