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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now I guess I'm done with you though I don't love you any less I offered you my everything nothing returned except "Regrets" but I am more than even I suspected in self-pity's sigh... I am loved at last by me... I feel the joy in raindrop's sting sizzling in summer's heat pavement cools beneath my feet the only blue is in my eyes reflections of the future skies. I love you. That will never change. I love you. That is my refrain. How sweet it could have been for us but now I need a hand in trust. I cannot take another day of wishing my own life away. I have the need to feel strong arms and tenderness to right my wrongs I want to sing and dance to song I need to need to not be strong. I have yearned too long for kiss and I love you, please know this. I cannot type it bold enough. I love you. But? Can't live unloved. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I need to need to not be strong. There is nothing worse than being alone in love, and to not be allowed to be somewhat weak to be cared for. What a fantastic job you did on this. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I am loved at last by me..." "the only blue is in my eyes reflections of the future skies." "How sweet it could have been for us but now I need a hand in trust." "I need to need to not be strong." Oh Serenity ... such power in these words! Wonderful thoughts throughout of a new strength, new realization, new beginnings. I greatly enjoyed this inspirational piece of self-discovery!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well done! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karen. . . there's nothing worse than regret. . . except perhaps the need to be loved. . . you know that I loved this one. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
man i can't copy and past the WHOLE thing here so I'll just say loved it majorly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll have to agree with walt... the only way I can include all my favorite parts is to repeat the poem. *S* This is great... so much strength, so well stated! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
dido Sven, I'm doing that trail.LP [This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
AWESOME POEM! I really agree with this. Its funny because I'm writing a letter to a guy I dated two years ago, when I decided to open this poem. Spoookkyyy. I agree with them... "I need the need Not to be strong" Awesome~ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but I am more than even I suspected in self-pity's sigh... I am loved at last by me... I feel the joy in raindrop's sting sizzling in summer's heat pavement cools beneath my feet the only blue is in my eyes reflections of the future skies. I love you. That will never change. I love you. That is my refrain. How sweet it could have been for us but now I need a hand in trust. I cannot take another day of wishing my own life away. I have the need to feel strong arms and tenderness to right my wrongs I want to sing and dance to song I need to need to not be strong. I have yearned too long for kiss and I love you, please know this. I cannot type it bold enough. I love you. But? Can't live unloved. ================================== me thinks me twin is finding her own butterfly wings ... and yer a beauty when ya fly baby.... love you sen, love you when you love yourself. *S*  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a testimony of love, and love is never wasted, even when we lose it, we gain so much. Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all. But I still miss him. (I'm kinda stubborn that way.) |
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